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What's happiness
In life, we always understand meaning of happiness. Many people think it's not very important, but in fact,it's great for our life, sports, friendships, and health. So, what is happiness?
I think taking a trip can make us happy.Once,my family went to Shanghai,it was very hot but we still felt happy.We ate the ice cream,played int the musuem ,and took some photos with my family.Our face were all with smile.So I think take a trip can make us happy.
Please cherish your family. Spending more time with them and traveling together always makes you happy!
最后一段你写的有点生硬,帮你改好了一点
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